This one looks great! I would love to see the other screenshot with the changes though, I think it would be neat. You should get someone to go in a kyf with you so you can re-enact it properly. On the Dwight one, I meant to make the camera be looking down on Dwight. In that old one the camera was in the ground looking up at Dwight, and made it just a little unsettling to look at imo.
This one looks great though, I love it!